Here are six again from Playing For Keeps (woman sportswriter/pro football player)
Going back to chapter 1. Here my heroine Samantha Jameson (yes I named her after my favorite Irish Whiskey - LOL) is war correspondent turned sportswriter. She waiting to interview the players in the locker room. She knows one of them from college and here is what she is thinking/remembering....
Ryan Terell. The thought of him evoked vivid memories.
Shoulder length hair falling in waves like rumpled satin, eyes the color of a fairy tale forest, and hands made for more than catching passes. Much more. Sure, great packaging, but underneath the chiseled exterior was a man who hadn't socially evolved from dragging his knuckles on the ground. If only he worked as hard on his interior.
Oooh. Rumpled satin! Love that image!
ReplyDeleteWhat a description! He may be a neanderthal, but that packaging sounds lovely.
ReplyDelete"eyes the color of a fairy tale forest" I love that! Great sentences!
ReplyDeleteI'm dying to see those eyes, "the color of a fairy tale forest." Swept away with that line.
ReplyDeleteKnuckle dragging jock. I love it!
ReplyDeleteI think i could ignor the dragging knuckles if he is a pretty as he sounds.....
ReplyDeleteI loved the "eyes the color of a fairy tale forest" that was just great. He may be the caveman type but , hey, sometimes they are worth the trouble. Oh and I love the picture of the guy with the balls (sorry-couldn't resist)
ReplyDeleteYou sure painted a picture Liz. He would go well with the Godiva brownies I had for breakfast.
ReplyDeleteOh, if only. How many guys like that there are in the world! And girls, too. Just a different asthetic for the outside.
ReplyDeleteMmm, he sounds yummy :)
ReplyDeleteGreat description! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by.
ReplyDeleteGlad everyone enjoyed it!
Amen to that sister! I think a lot of them have that problem. lol
ReplyDelete@Jayel - very funny :))
ReplyDeleteReally like those sentences. Intrigues me.
ReplyDeleteHer reaction to him made me grin. How fun.
ReplyDeleteI'll take a glass of Jameson with that ball player...
ReplyDeletehehe love the knuckle dragging part.
ReplyDeleteMaybe he's changed?
ReplyDeleteLOL I especially enjoyed the knuckle dragging line.
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