Sunday, February 27, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - 2/27/11

Still from Playing For Keeps....

Unspoken words of love choked him. But she wasn't ready to hear it. Samantha's issues were deeper than reporter and athlete. He turned her palms up and ran his forefinger along the lines wishing he could read them and know what the future held. Ryan waited patiently, watching her mind at work, going through each angle, then discarding it, and moving on to the next. Her cell's ring-tone filled the air ending what little hope he had of her trusting him with the dark secret she hid from the world.

29 comments:

  1. I love their interactions. Hate interruptions!

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  2. Hope she shares that secret with him.

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  3. Dark secret? I wonder what that could be??? Great snippet!

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  4. Ooo Great moment, I want to know the secret!!

    xx
    Angela
    http://angelasstone.livejournal.com

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  5. Lovely snippet. Makes me want to read on to learn the secret!

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  6. Lots of teasing in this excerpt. Yay!

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  7. I wonder what the lines of the palm have to tell...

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  8. Beautiful. Taking your time as the story unfolds.

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  9. Great tension building!

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  10. Oh, I want to know what her secret it! Love the snippet!

    ~Sarah

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  11. That was so Poignant. I want to hear more from them. amarmar

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  12. That was so Poignant. I want to hear more from them.

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  13. Great moment, it really conveyed a sadness.

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  14. Just when he's moving closer... that pesky cell phone. Suspenseful six!

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  15. Dark secrets, Nice ending to his thoughts.

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  16. Aww...he sounds like a good guy. She should trust him.

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  17. I love how much he's fallen for her.

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  18. I'm gonna need more next week! Great snippet as always!

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  19. Can't help but wonder what she's hiding. Great six!

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  20. Boo for interruptions! But I love how he is so in tune with her. Nice six :)

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  21. I love secrets! You can tell me, I promise not to squeal!

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  22. Bad time for an interruption!

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