Sunday, February 27, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - 2/27/11

Still from Playing For Keeps....

Unspoken words of love choked him. But she wasn't ready to hear it. Samantha's issues were deeper than reporter and athlete. He turned her palms up and ran his forefinger along the lines wishing he could read them and know what the future held. Ryan waited patiently, watching her mind at work, going through each angle, then discarding it, and moving on to the next. Her cell's ring-tone filled the air ending what little hope he had of her trusting him with the dark secret she hid from the world.

29 comments:

Jessica Subject said...

I love their interactions. Hate interruptions!

Ella Drake said...

Hope she shares that secret with him.

Lisa Fox said...

Dark secret? I wonder what that could be??? Great snippet!

Taryn Kincaid said...

Keep going!

Jackie said...

Ooo Great moment, I want to know the secret!!

xx
Angela
http://angelasstone.livejournal.com

Cate Masters said...

Lovely snippet. Makes me want to read on to learn the secret!

Yolanda said...

Love this story!

Sandra Sookoo said...

Really nice snippet!

Vivien Jackson said...

Lots of teasing in this excerpt. Yay!

Chrystalla Thoma said...

I wonder what the lines of the palm have to tell...

charmainegordon author said...

Beautiful. Taking your time as the story unfolds.

kayspringsteen said...

Great tension building!

Laura Kaye said...

Can feel his anguish over her!

Rebecca Royce said...

What is the secret??

Sarah Grimm said...

Oh, I want to know what her secret it! Love the snippet!

~Sarah

Casi said...

That was so Poignant. I want to hear more from them. amarmar

Casi said...

That was so Poignant. I want to hear more from them.

Kerrianne Coombes said...

Nice six xx

Cathy M said...

Great moment, it really conveyed a sadness.

Lynne Murray said...

Just when he's moving closer... that pesky cell phone. Suspenseful six!

JL Walters said...

Dark secrets, Nice ending to his thoughts.

Dee Carney said...

Aww...he sounds like a good guy. She should trust him.

Lex Valentine said...

I love how much he's fallen for her.

heatherthurmeier said...

I'm gonna need more next week! Great snippet as always!

Lauri J Owen said...

Can't help but wonder what she's hiding. Great six!

Seleste said...

Boo for interruptions! But I love how he is so in tune with her. Nice six :)

Emily Cale said...

I love secrets! You can tell me, I promise not to squeal!

Lucy Felthouse said...

I'm intrigued.... ;)

joleenenaylor said...

Bad time for an interruption!