Sunday, March 27, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - 3/27/11

More from Love By Design - just a few minutes later - the meeting with the network executives is about to begin....


Russ leaned back in the chair looking as though he was the star of the show and not an unwanted interloper. How could he be so relaxed when she was wound tighter than a bad celebrity facelift? Victoria tilted her head from side to side. Despite her misgivings, she wished his tanned hands were busy massaging her shoulders instead of tossing a paper weight into the air and catching it with the flair of a Las Vegas magician - so unprofessional.
God, he rubbed her the wrong way. She looked away before she started thinking about him rubbing her the right way.

29 comments:

  1. Great way to show the sexual tension on her end! :)

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  2. I LOVE that last line and though I miss Ryan, I can't wait to see more of this one.

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  3. Love the love/hate going on. Great six.

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  4. "wound tighter than a celebrty face lift"- Love that line!

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  5. The tension in this book is really fab! I love how you play between her wanting and hating him. ;)

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  6. Wonderful. Love "tighter than a bad celebrity facelift." Great!

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  7. Great internal conflict, and fun twist at the end.

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  8. lol "bad celebrity facelift" Awesome. Great 6!

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  9. LOL! I love the two last lines. Awesome!

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  10. Like her internal conflict, trying her best to avoid their chemistry.

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  11. Nice, great visual. Love the imagery.

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  12. Very nice. I like the last line.

    ~ Renee

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  13. LOL. Love this snippet! From 'bad celebrity facelift' to 'rubbing her the right way'. Fun!

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  14. Very nice. Great snippet. I want to read more. :)

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  15. Great tension and I love that last line.

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  16. tighter than a bad celebrity facelift... that was great.

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  17. You've done it again. That sly last line made me chuckle.

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  18. heh-heh. Great love/hate going on here!

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  19. Loved that line about the celebrity facelift. :)

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  20. Hehe, I can't wait to see where this is going...

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