Sunday, May 15, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - 5/15/11


More from Love By Design....

Later that night, Victoria lay in bed wide-awake. Somehow his beach scent drifted upstairs or perhaps she was imagining it. She couldn’t believe she almost kissed him. What was she thinking? Sex - no, dirty sex -dirty sex that cleanses a woman of all that ails her. And Russ was just the man for the job.

25 comments:

  1. Oh, dirty sex (love the "cleans the woman of all that ails her.") So true!!

    Love this.

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  2. Love the paradox. Thanks for sharing!

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  3. Sex yes! Dirty beach smelling sex heck yeah!

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  4. Terrific, especially the last line. Have you finished this one?

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  5. Yes - it's all finished - just have to write the synopsis

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  6. Oh my. Great six. Congrats on finishing this one. Can't wait to see what you give us next!

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  7. I've got a job for Russ, too! Great excerpt. Good luck with the submission.

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  8. *licks screen* love the pic! :D

    Naughty six, too. Love it!

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  9. Love the line "cleans a woman of all that ails her". :) Great snippet.

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  10. oooh, now that's a sexy snippet. Great job!

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  11. Sometimes we all need one of these.

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  12. "dirty sex that cleanses a woman of all that ails her" I love that line

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  13. If that's Russ. I totally agree. Nice six.

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  14. Sometimes that's the only remedy for what ails ya. Great six!

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  15. LOL I need me some of that, too! ::grins:: Great job and good imagery.

    Best,
    Allure

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  16. oo, very nice.
    And is that Hugh J? yum :)

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  17. You little tease! Great descriptions *and photo [fans self]*. Loved it

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  18. Like this story. Good luck with the dreaded synopsis.

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