Sunday, May 15, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - 5/15/11


More from Love By Design....

Later that night, Victoria lay in bed wide-awake. Somehow his beach scent drifted upstairs or perhaps she was imagining it. She couldn’t believe she almost kissed him. What was she thinking? Sex - no, dirty sex -dirty sex that cleanses a woman of all that ails her. And Russ was just the man for the job.

25 comments:

writeintention said...

oooo, aaaa, seeeexy!! Nice 6.

Jessica Subject said...

Great internal conflict! :)

Gem Sivad said...

Oh, dirty sex (love the "cleans the woman of all that ails her.") So true!!

Love this.

Roberta Walker said...

Love the paradox. Thanks for sharing!

Jennifer L Hart said...

Sex yes! Dirty beach smelling sex heck yeah!

Taryn Kincaid said...

Terrific, especially the last line. Have you finished this one?

Liz said...

Yes - it's all finished - just have to write the synopsis

Heather Thurmeier said...

Oh my. Great six. Congrats on finishing this one. Can't wait to see what you give us next!

Wendy S. Marcus said...

I've got a job for Russ, too! Great excerpt. Good luck with the submission.

Lisa said...

Great six!

Lucy Felthouse said...

*licks screen* love the pic! :D

Naughty six, too. Love it!

Cate Masters said...

Love the line "cleans a woman of all that ails her". :) Great snippet.

Sandra Sookoo said...

oooh, now that's a sexy snippet. Great job!

Rebecca Royce said...

Dirty Sex!! AHHH. Well done.

Carolyn Rosewood said...

SEXY!!!

Viviane Brentanos said...

Sometimes we all need one of these.

Jayel Kaye said...

"dirty sex that cleanses a woman of all that ails her" I love that line

Ginger Simpson said...

If that's Russ. I totally agree. Nice six.

Lindsay said...

Great hot dirty sex six.

Liana Brooks said...

Sometimes that's the only remedy for what ails ya. Great six!

AllureVanSanz said...

LOL I need me some of that, too! ::grins:: Great job and good imagery.

Best,
Allure

Kim Knox said...

oo, very nice.
And is that Hugh J? yum :)

lexcade said...

You little tease! Great descriptions *and photo [fans self]*. Loved it

JL Walters said...

Like this story. Good luck with the dreaded synopsis.

Cherie Marks said...

Ooooh, that's hot! Nice SSS.