Sunday, December 4, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday 12/4/11

Since last weeks snippet was such a success I will continue a little later in this scene. Victoria has just finished off Russ by licking off ALL the chocolate she painted on his body. While he recovers she begins drawing on herself with whipped cream - then she draws an arrow from her breasts down to her - well you know... and this is Russ' reaction.


Something inside Russ snapped. All the energy she zapped from his body returned like a bolt of lightning waking Frankenstein from the dead and his thoughts just as carnal and primitive as when the monster saw his bride. Picking her up, he threw her onto the bed. The line of whipped cream beckoned his tongue. “I don’t need any damn directions.”

14 comments:

Jessica Subject said...

LOL Love his reaction! A fabulous six!

Gem Sivad said...

Well now...it's good to see a take charge man. Love it!

Jonna Rae said...

Yay! I love this. You had me during the lead up description. Please continue this next week.

Sandra Sookoo said...

LOL Great male reaction!

J.C. Martin said...

Didn't their parents teach them not to play with their food? Ooh. but such naughty culinary games! Yum! :)

marianne said...

Fun, fun fun!

Ranae Rose said...

Ooh, I like his response. And the Frankenstein mention! LOL :)

Lila Shaw said...

Oh, this is wonderful! Great line at the end.

Cate Masters said...

Men always say that. ;) Glad he's following them anyway!

Xakara said...

Great intensity, but he shouldn't knock directions *grin*

~Xakara
A Way To A Dragon's Heart 6SS

Eleri Stone said...

Love the energy in this. It just rips right along.

Jayel Kaye said...

Very cute

Gayle Ramage said...

lol, brilliant!

Layna Pimentel said...

Ha! Fantastic! Love his reaction!!!