Sunday, December 4, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday 12/4/11

Since last weeks snippet was such a success I will continue a little later in this scene. Victoria has just finished off Russ by licking off ALL the chocolate she painted on his body. While he recovers she begins drawing on herself with whipped cream - then she draws an arrow from her breasts down to her - well you know... and this is Russ' reaction.


Something inside Russ snapped. All the energy she zapped from his body returned like a bolt of lightning waking Frankenstein from the dead and his thoughts just as carnal and primitive as when the monster saw his bride. Picking her up, he threw her onto the bed. The line of whipped cream beckoned his tongue. “I don’t need any damn directions.”

14 comments:

  1. LOL Love his reaction! A fabulous six!

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  2. Well now...it's good to see a take charge man. Love it!

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  3. Yay! I love this. You had me during the lead up description. Please continue this next week.

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  4. Didn't their parents teach them not to play with their food? Ooh. but such naughty culinary games! Yum! :)

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  5. Ooh, I like his response. And the Frankenstein mention! LOL :)

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  6. Oh, this is wonderful! Great line at the end.

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  7. Men always say that. ;) Glad he's following them anyway!

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  8. Great intensity, but he shouldn't knock directions *grin*

    ~Xakara
    A Way To A Dragon's Heart 6SS

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  9. Love the energy in this. It just rips right along.

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  10. Ha! Fantastic! Love his reaction!!!

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