Sunday, January 8, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday 1/8/12

Six from Love By Design - the Sex and the City meets HGTV romp. A reader said it was so hot she might start ovulating again!

Russ turned his head to see a tall, thin man, with a shock of silver hair that had to come from a bottle race to Victoria. Dressed in white leather pants even though it was eighty-five degrees out, a bright yellow t-shirt, his squeal of ‘Victoria’ nearly shattered Russ’ eardrums. So this was the famous Neil come to reclaim his co-hosting job. Sure he’d seen clips but none of them had Victoria wrapping herself around him in a big hug.
He shouldn’t be jealous—Neil was gay but he was Victoria’s best friend, and while he knew how to win over a female’s BFF’s opinion, he never had to win the approval of a male friend of a woman. Russ didn’t know if the same charm tactics would work — hell, he wasn’t about to try.

14 comments:

  1. LOL Love the last line. I wonder what Russ will do. Great six! :)

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  2. Love the description. I can see this quite clearly...it plays out like a movie in my head.

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  3. Wonderful description, and love his voice!

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  4. Love his jealousy over a BFF. It's endearing to me.

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  5. Yes, I agree with Cara. I "see" this scene you've written so vividly. Great six!

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  6. Great scene and I recommend reading the whole book. It is definitely hot and and an enjoyable read.

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  7. great snippet showing Russ' character and his jealousy. Nice balance of action and internal monologue...

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  8. Too funny. Want to know how he plays this out. Love it when a man is out of his comfort zone.

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  9. Interesting on Russ' part. Jealousy will get you every time

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  10. Poor Russ sounds at a loss, and you left me wondering what he'll do to work around this one. Great six!! I'm looking forward to reading this one :)

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