Sunday, August 21, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - 08/21/11

Back from vacation - this is continuing the scene I started on six sentence 8/7....



Another creak, this time closer, and she saw a figure by the darken archway leading into the living room. She was just about to let out a scream that would rival any made for Halloween movie when she heard the familiar Aussie drawl.
“I’m home, Cupcake,” he said as he entered the room with his hands up.
Victoria froze like a statue as if he was a bear she stumbled upon in the woods - or was the rule to drop to the ground, curl into a ball and try not to cry? She was a city girl for crying out loud. What did she know about taming wild animals or wild handsome Aussies? Well, she knew one thing: never stare directly into their eyes,but that is exactly what she did.
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18 comments:

  1. Jessica E. SubjectAugust 21, 2011 at 6:00 AM

    Cute and sexy at the same time. I look forward to reading more. :)

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  2. Taryn KincaidAugust 21, 2011 at 8:28 AM

    Wild handsome Aussies. Sigh.

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  3. Heather ThurmeierAugust 21, 2011 at 9:01 AM

    Awesome snippet! Love it. Can't wait for this to be available so I can read the whole thing!

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  4. AlixAugust 21, 2011 at 9:22 AM

    Great six, with lots expressed in so few words. A great job!

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  5. Layna PimentelAugust 21, 2011 at 10:01 AM

    Intriguing snippet! Cant' wait to see more. :)

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  6. Rebecca RoyceAugust 21, 2011 at 11:03 AM

    I want to read more right now. That is fantastically done.

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  7. marianneAugust 21, 2011 at 11:09 AM

    Oh Liz, it is so cruel to stop there and leave us all wanting more. I can't wait to read the whole thing! And I like the nickname Cupcake...I'm taking it as my Sawyer nickname.

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  8. D CarneyAugust 21, 2011 at 11:12 AM

    Very nice six! Keep going!

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  9. Sandra SookooAugust 21, 2011 at 11:18 AM

    lol I loved this snippet :-)

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  10. Gem SivadAugust 21, 2011 at 11:59 AM

    I like this wild Aussie who calls her "cupcake". Great characters and cheeky six.

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  11. Angela S. StoneAugust 21, 2011 at 12:11 PM

    OOoo Wild Aussies.. Love those!!!

    xx
    A.

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  12. Joanne StewartAugust 21, 2011 at 12:36 PM

    Ha. Love it. Love this line especially: "or was the rule to drop to the ground, curl into a ball and try not to cry?"

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  13. Cate MastersAugust 21, 2011 at 12:49 PM

    Love her voice. Wonderful teaser, full of humor and sexy too.

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  14. Janet Lane WaltersAugust 21, 2011 at 6:17 PM

    Liz, really enjoy these sentences. Made me laugh.

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  15. Tara AndrewsAugust 21, 2011 at 8:51 PM

    Sexy Aussie,don't stare into thier eyes - Love it!

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  16. Hailey EdwardsAugust 21, 2011 at 10:14 PM

    Mmm. Aussie accents are so sexy.

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  17. Lisa FoxAugust 22, 2011 at 10:39 AM

    Wild, handsome Aussies - there are really few things better.

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  18. JoAnne KenrickAugust 22, 2011 at 3:44 PM

    Hawt... I'm totally imagining the movie Australia with this snippet. Fab work!

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