Sunday, August 21, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - 08/21/11

Back from vacation - this is continuing the scene I started on six sentence 8/7....



Another creak, this time closer, and she saw a figure by the darken archway leading into the living room. She was just about to let out a scream that would rival any made for Halloween movie when she heard the familiar Aussie drawl.
“I’m home, Cupcake,” he said as he entered the room with his hands up.
Victoria froze like a statue as if he was a bear she stumbled upon in the woods - or was the rule to drop to the ground, curl into a ball and try not to cry? She was a city girl for crying out loud. What did she know about taming wild animals or wild handsome Aussies? Well, she knew one thing: never stare directly into their eyes,but that is exactly what she did.

18 comments:

  1. Cute and sexy at the same time. I look forward to reading more. :)

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  2. Awesome snippet! Love it. Can't wait for this to be available so I can read the whole thing!

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  3. Great six, with lots expressed in so few words. A great job!

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  4. Intriguing snippet! Cant' wait to see more. :)

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  5. I want to read more right now. That is fantastically done.

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  6. Oh Liz, it is so cruel to stop there and leave us all wanting more. I can't wait to read the whole thing! And I like the nickname Cupcake...I'm taking it as my Sawyer nickname.

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  7. I like this wild Aussie who calls her "cupcake". Great characters and cheeky six.

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  8. OOoo Wild Aussies.. Love those!!!

    xx
    A.

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  9. Ha. Love it. Love this line especially: "or was the rule to drop to the ground, curl into a ball and try not to cry?"

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  10. Love her voice. Wonderful teaser, full of humor and sexy too.

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  11. Liz, really enjoy these sentences. Made me laugh.

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  12. Sexy Aussie,don't stare into thier eyes - Love it!

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  13. Wild, handsome Aussies - there are really few things better.

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  14. Hawt... I'm totally imagining the movie Australia with this snippet. Fab work!

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