Sunday, September 18, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - 09/18/11

Six more from Love By Design - release date late October... Russ and Victoria just had sex for the first time (in the homeowners living room :) .....


Russ wanted to reach out and trace his finger from the top of her spine down to the hollow of her back. Then do the same with his lips. He wasn’t nearly finished exploring the tapestry of Victoria’s skin. He blew out a breath and sat up next to her. “I’m covering for friend at the Thunder Down Under Male Revue.”
“Please tell me you’re a bartender.”
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23 comments:

  1. Jessica E. SubjectSeptember 18, 2011 at 6:51 AM

    Very sensual! Love the last line! I wonder... :)

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  2. AlixSeptember 18, 2011 at 8:24 AM

    Nice Nice six, or should I say a don under six ;) Great job.

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  3. Kelly's MomSeptember 18, 2011 at 8:41 AM

    I TOTALLY laughed out loud at the last two lines! Great, humorous ending. I love that it followed such tenderness. The mix of emotions is very engaging!

    Amy Durham

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  4. Lisa FoxSeptember 18, 2011 at 8:42 AM

    Lol! "Thunder Down Under" = fantastic!

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  5. Sandra SookooSeptember 18, 2011 at 8:50 AM

    "tapestry of her skin" Awesome!

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  6. Taryn KincaidSeptember 18, 2011 at 9:06 AM

    "tapestry of her skin" is a great phrase.

    Best of luckk with the release.

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  7. Sarah GrimmSeptember 18, 2011 at 9:53 AM

    LOL I did not expect the last two lines!

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  8. J.C. MartinSeptember 18, 2011 at 10:02 AM

    I didn't know what a male revue was until now. You learn something new everyday!

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  9. LizSeptember 18, 2011 at 10:05 AM

    THUNDER DOWN UNDER??!!! my favorite male revue hands down!
    well done...must read!
    "the other Liz"

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  10. Heather ThurmeierSeptember 18, 2011 at 10:11 AM

    Is he a bartender? I'm not sure if I want him to be a bartender or a performer...Great six. Can't wait for this to be available.

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  11. Cate MastersSeptember 18, 2011 at 11:42 AM

    Ha! Love the surprise at the end, and wonderful description!

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  12. Cassandra CarrSeptember 18, 2011 at 11:59 AM

    Ha! I cracked up when I got to that last line!

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  13. Guilie CastilloSeptember 18, 2011 at 12:34 PM

    Good snippet! Love the humor of the last line.

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  14. Carrie Ann RyanSeptember 18, 2011 at 1:34 PM

    Oh, sensual. Nice!

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  15. AnonymousSeptember 18, 2011 at 2:03 PM

    I'd say he definately wants to see her again. Yummy six.

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  16. Lex ValentineSeptember 18, 2011 at 2:12 PM

    He sounds so sexy!

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  17. Gem SivadSeptember 18, 2011 at 2:36 PM

    Humorous and sexy at the same time. Great six!

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  18. LindsaySeptember 18, 2011 at 2:41 PM

    Steamy six and great hook with the last line

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  19. Janet Lane WaltersSeptember 18, 2011 at 4:27 PM

    Really like the idea of the tapestry of her skin.

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  20. StaceySeptember 18, 2011 at 8:37 PM

    Yowza...that's delicious!! Awesome!

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  21. D CarneySeptember 19, 2011 at 8:08 PM

    "Tapestry of [her] skin." I am *so* stealing that line.

    {cough}

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  22. Hailey EdwardsSeptember 20, 2011 at 6:57 AM

    Oh, I like the "tapestry of her skin" line. Very nicely done.

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  23. LizSeptember 20, 2011 at 7:27 AM

    Thanks everyone!

    That line about the tapestry of her skin came from the fact that they are both interior designers and as such texture and touch is very important

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