Sunday, November 13, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - 11/13/11

My newest recent, Playing For Keeps, reached #7 on one of the Amazon Bestseller lists! Here is end of the first kiss scene.
Playing For Keeps is about a woman sportswriter and a professional football player. The scene takes place inside a stuck elevator. After playing a couple of rounds of Go Fish (a card game) – one thing leads to another – and they are kissing – and then…

“Ryan, we’re going down.”
“You’re going down?” he asked dazed.
She pounded on his chest. “No, you idiot!”
The realization of what she meant hit him like a bucket of cold Gatorade. He immediately released her and stepped to the far side of the elevator shaking his head. “And we spent the last hour playing Go Fish.”

13 comments:

  1. Oh, I can sense his disappointment. Maybe they should just press the emergency button and stop it again. LOL A great six! :)

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  2. Great six, made me smile at his frustration, and love his last comment!

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  3. Dang! Will the lift stall again? I LOL-ed at his daxed statement. :)

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  4. LOL! That play on words is awesome!

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  5. Oh such disappointment! But I love your six!

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  6. Fun six; cute dialogue. (I remember this!)

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  7. Remember this maybe. It's a funny scene.

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  8. Ooh, he missed his chance! For now...may get a do over, I have a feeling! Loved the excerpt! Must read the book!

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