My newest recent, Playing For Keeps, reached #7 on one of the Amazon Bestseller lists! Here is end of the first kiss scene.
Playing For Keeps is about a woman sportswriter and a professional football player. The scene takes place inside a stuck elevator. After playing a couple of rounds of Go Fish (a card game) – one thing leads to another – and they are kissing – and then…
“Ryan, we’re going down.”
“You’re going down?” he asked dazed.
She pounded on his chest. “No, you idiot!”
The realization of what she meant hit him like a bucket of cold Gatorade. He immediately released her and stepped to the far side of the elevator shaking his head. “And we spent the last hour playing Go Fish.”
Oh, I can sense his disappointment. Maybe they should just press the emergency button and stop it again. LOL A great six! :)
ReplyDeleteLol! Poor Ryan!
ReplyDeleteGreat six, made me smile at his frustration, and love his last comment!
ReplyDeleteAh, hind sight. :) Fun scene.
ReplyDeleteDang! Will the lift stall again? I LOL-ed at his daxed statement. :)
ReplyDeleteToo funny and so charming. Good job Liz.
ReplyDeleteLOL! That play on words is awesome!
ReplyDeleteOh such disappointment! But I love your six!
ReplyDeleteLOL love the banter :-)
ReplyDeleteFun six; cute dialogue. (I remember this!)
ReplyDeleteRemember this maybe. It's a funny scene.
ReplyDeleteOoh, he missed his chance! For now...may get a do over, I have a feeling! Loved the excerpt! Must read the book!
ReplyDeleteThanks Veronica!
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