I've talked before writing from a man's POV versus a woman's POV. The example below happened on Facebook last night and illustrates the way men really think.
Ok so last night I posted a couple of sentences from my work in progress Going For It - here it is...
Jake tried pretending she didn't exist - that her loveliness was a figment of his imagination but her soft moans along with her fevered pitched screams of her calling his name haunted his dreams. Hannah was so right - he did dream of her.
Deeply passionate - don't you think? Yeah, only a male friend/co-worker posted his hilarious take..
Here's Carmen's version: The Patriots could pretend the Jets didn't exist - that Sanchez's loud moans after getting sacked so many times along with Rex Ryan's fevered pitched screams of the referees calling "Patriots touchdown" haunted his dreams. Carmen was so right - the Jets suck :-
Men -are so simple - no wonder they don't understand us.
Liz, This made me laugh. You are so right.
ReplyDeleteI never saw this guy before. Don't watch H5O & never saw the other, either. He's quite the tasty morsel.
ReplyDeleteBut wait. You say he's in HAWAII and the writers can't think of ways for him to lose his shirt?
Bad writers. Bad, bad writers!!