Sunday, January 30, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - 1/30/11


Good news....Ellora's Cave has requested a full on Playing For Keeps - keep your fingers crossed for me! Here is my six for this week....

Even though the shower could fit four easily, she backed up as he got in. “Um...” Having never showered with someone before, Samantha instinctively crossed her arms over her breasts.
“Stop hogging the water,” complained Ryan.
Feeling foolish, she dropped her arms and moved over so he could get wet. And so she could enjoy the view. With the water cascading over his rippling muscles, he looked like a fountain created by Michelangelo.
Then he ruined the effect by sweeping his hand along the top of his head, smattering Samantha with water.
“Thanks a lot,” she sputtered.
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21 comments:

  1. Taryn KincaidJanuary 30, 2011 at 12:17 AM

    Congrats on the request! Best wishes/fingers crossed.

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  2. Jessica E. SubjectJanuary 30, 2011 at 6:54 AM

    Congrats! ohh, a playful one. :) Thay shower will be loads of fun.

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  3. AnonymousJanuary 30, 2011 at 7:30 AM

    CONGRATULATIONS! Fingers crossed. Great six. Fun xx

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  4. Emma PetersenJanuary 30, 2011 at 9:01 AM

    WOOT! WOOT! Fingers crossed! Congrats!

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  5. AnonymousJanuary 30, 2011 at 9:30 AM

    Congrats on the request for a full! I'll cross my fingers for you. Great snippet again this week!!!

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  6. LynceeJanuary 30, 2011 at 10:29 AM

    I'm with everyone else in the congrat's on the request. Guys are such water hogs in the shower.

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  7. Jayel KayeJanuary 30, 2011 at 10:30 AM

    Guys in the shower. Oh yes! Congrats on the full request.

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  8. Sarah GrimmJanuary 30, 2011 at 11:08 AM

    I get the feeling this seen is about to get even more playful. :) Congrats on the request for a full!

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  9. Marie DeesJanuary 30, 2011 at 11:09 AM

    Oh, nice! Good luck with the request!

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  10. Sandra SookooJanuary 30, 2011 at 11:40 AM

    Yum! Good luck with the request!

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  11. Cate MastersJanuary 30, 2011 at 11:41 AM

    Congrats on the request for more! Your six make me want more too. :)

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  12. Rebecca RoyceJanuary 30, 2011 at 11:55 AM

    Good job on the request. Sounds fantastic.

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  13. Marsha A. MooreJanuary 30, 2011 at 1:16 PM

    Fun twist from the serene admiration of his shape to a face-full of shower spray! Great contrast!

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  14. Lisa FoxJanuary 30, 2011 at 1:44 PM

    Congrats on the request! YAY!!!

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  15. Lex ValentineJanuary 30, 2011 at 2:04 PM

    These two are awesome. Good luck with EC!

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  16. TrishJanuary 30, 2011 at 3:20 PM

    Whoot! Fingers crossed that the request will lead to a sale.

    That shower scene looks like its going to be great fun to read.

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  17. D CarneyJanuary 30, 2011 at 4:09 PM

    Girl, I'd be enjoying the view too! ;)

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  18. LizJanuary 30, 2011 at 4:22 PM

    Thanks everyone for the love!!

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  19. Janet Lane WaltersJanuary 30, 2011 at 6:54 PM

    Interesting sentences. Hope they love your story/

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  20. Pip GreenJanuary 31, 2011 at 3:08 AM

    Oh, love it, great six!

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  21. JoAnne KenrickJanuary 31, 2011 at 6:45 PM

    congrats on the request!!

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