Sunday, January 30, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - 1/30/11


Good news....Ellora's Cave has requested a full on Playing For Keeps - keep your fingers crossed for me! Here is my six for this week....

Even though the shower could fit four easily, she backed up as he got in. “Um...” Having never showered with someone before, Samantha instinctively crossed her arms over her breasts.
“Stop hogging the water,” complained Ryan.
Feeling foolish, she dropped her arms and moved over so he could get wet. And so she could enjoy the view. With the water cascading over his rippling muscles, he looked like a fountain created by Michelangelo.
Then he ruined the effect by sweeping his hand along the top of his head, smattering Samantha with water.
“Thanks a lot,” she sputtered.

21 comments:

Taryn Kincaid said...

Congrats on the request! Best wishes/fingers crossed.

Jessica Subject said...

Congrats! ohh, a playful one. :) Thay shower will be loads of fun.

Kerrianne Coombes said...

CONGRATULATIONS! Fingers crossed. Great six. Fun xx

Emma Petersen said...

WOOT! WOOT! Fingers crossed! Congrats!

heatherthurmeier said...

Congrats on the request for a full! I'll cross my fingers for you. Great snippet again this week!!!

Lyncee said...

I'm with everyone else in the congrat's on the request. Guys are such water hogs in the shower.

Jayel Kaye said...

Guys in the shower. Oh yes! Congrats on the full request.

Sarah Grimm said...

I get the feeling this seen is about to get even more playful. :) Congrats on the request for a full!

Marie Dees said...

Oh, nice! Good luck with the request!

Sandra Sookoo said...

Yum! Good luck with the request!

Cate Masters said...

Congrats on the request for more! Your six make me want more too. :)

Rebecca Royce said...

Good job on the request. Sounds fantastic.

Marsha A. Moore said...

Fun twist from the serene admiration of his shape to a face-full of shower spray! Great contrast!

Lisa Fox said...

Congrats on the request! YAY!!!

Lex Valentine said...

These two are awesome. Good luck with EC!

Trish said...

Whoot! Fingers crossed that the request will lead to a sale.

That shower scene looks like its going to be great fun to read.

Dee Carney said...

Girl, I'd be enjoying the view too! ;)

Liz said...

Thanks everyone for the love!!

JL Walters said...

Interesting sentences. Hope they love your story/

Pippa Jay said...

Oh, love it, great six!

Jo-Anne Kenrick said...

congrats on the request!!