Sunday, January 30, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - 1/30/11


Good news....Ellora's Cave has requested a full on Playing For Keeps - keep your fingers crossed for me! Here is my six for this week....

Even though the shower could fit four easily, she backed up as he got in. “Um...” Having never showered with someone before, Samantha instinctively crossed her arms over her breasts.
“Stop hogging the water,” complained Ryan.
Feeling foolish, she dropped her arms and moved over so he could get wet. And so she could enjoy the view. With the water cascading over his rippling muscles, he looked like a fountain created by Michelangelo.
Then he ruined the effect by sweeping his hand along the top of his head, smattering Samantha with water.
“Thanks a lot,” she sputtered.

21 comments:

  1. Congrats on the request! Best wishes/fingers crossed.

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  2. Congrats! ohh, a playful one. :) Thay shower will be loads of fun.

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  3. CONGRATULATIONS! Fingers crossed. Great six. Fun xx

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  4. WOOT! WOOT! Fingers crossed! Congrats!

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  5. Congrats on the request for a full! I'll cross my fingers for you. Great snippet again this week!!!

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  6. I'm with everyone else in the congrat's on the request. Guys are such water hogs in the shower.

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  7. Guys in the shower. Oh yes! Congrats on the full request.

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  8. I get the feeling this seen is about to get even more playful. :) Congrats on the request for a full!

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  9. Oh, nice! Good luck with the request!

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  10. Congrats on the request for more! Your six make me want more too. :)

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  11. Good job on the request. Sounds fantastic.

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  12. Fun twist from the serene admiration of his shape to a face-full of shower spray! Great contrast!

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  13. Congrats on the request! YAY!!!

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  14. These two are awesome. Good luck with EC!

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  15. Whoot! Fingers crossed that the request will lead to a sale.

    That shower scene looks like its going to be great fun to read.

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  16. Girl, I'd be enjoying the view too! ;)

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  17. Thanks everyone for the love!!

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  18. Interesting sentences. Hope they love your story/

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