Sunday, January 9, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - 1/9/11



Going back a couple of chapters in Playing For Keeps.
Ryan has proposition Samantha to come up to his room (she is staying at the same hotel as the football team) They reached the elevator at the same time after checking in but she won’t get in and Ryan put his hand on the door so it won’t close as he awaits her decision...

Those hands could cradle the ball with such subtle grace that made her breasts ache in need. He caught impossible passes, using his long, slender fingers to coax the ball to do his bidding, like he would coax her to a climax.
“Coming?” he asked suggestively.
Samantha looked him in the eyes and swallowed her lustful thoughts. “I’ll take the stairs.”
Ryan shook his head in disappointment and dropped his hand. “Chicken.”
The door slid shut.

22 comments:

Taryn Kincaid said...

Great double entrendre.

Jessica Subject said...

I love the interaction between Samantha and Ryan! Way to play hard to get. :)

Kathleen Grieve said...

These two promise a lot of fun, interesting interactions...

Lisa Fox said...

They have such great tension. And that double entendre is totally hot!

heatherthurmeier said...

"Coming?" LOL. Love it!! Great snippet.

Fallon said...

I love how fun this is. I'm a big fan of scenes that have a certain, sexy humor to them.

Kerrianne Coombes said...

He could coax me to do his biding! LOL Great six

Sandra Sookoo said...

Nice snippet :-)

graylinfox said...

Sounds like fun! Nice snippet.

laynap said...

Great snippet.

Eve Cassidy said...

Very nice!

Dawne Prochilo said...

Stairs can be fun too... so many potential positions- he should've followed Samanatha

marianne said...

Your girl has a great imagination. I like the way she thinks.

Laurie A. Green said...

Love the teasing tone in Ryan's words and Samantha's internal struggle. Fun snippet!

Is this Contemporary Romance (or erotica)? GREAT title.

Jayel Kaye said...

You're writing about what every woman who watches football is thinking. Great hands and nice tight butts... oh yes

Eleri Stone said...

Hmmm. I think she's making a bad call here.

Arlene said...

So much suggested with few words, along with perfect double entrendre. Well done.

Liz said...

Thanks everyone!

@Laurie - it's very hot and may border on erotica - I sent it to Ellora's Cave. There are several sex scenes - weigh room, in back on his humvee, an actual bed, and the shower - so I don't know.

Liz said...

@Dawn - agreed stairs can be fun too!

Lex Valentine said...

Oh man. How could she not go for it?

Marsha A. Moore said...

Love her internal conflict! I think she'll regret that decision.

Liz said...

lol - good things comes to those who wait