Sunday, January 9, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - 1/9/11



Going back a couple of chapters in Playing For Keeps.
Ryan has proposition Samantha to come up to his room (she is staying at the same hotel as the football team) They reached the elevator at the same time after checking in but she won’t get in and Ryan put his hand on the door so it won’t close as he awaits her decision...

Those hands could cradle the ball with such subtle grace that made her breasts ache in need. He caught impossible passes, using his long, slender fingers to coax the ball to do his bidding, like he would coax her to a climax.
“Coming?” he asked suggestively.
Samantha looked him in the eyes and swallowed her lustful thoughts. “I’ll take the stairs.”
Ryan shook his head in disappointment and dropped his hand. “Chicken.”
The door slid shut.
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21 comments:

  1. Taryn KincaidJanuary 9, 2011 at 12:11 AM

    Great double entrendre.

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  2. Jessica E. SubjectJanuary 9, 2011 at 6:16 AM

    I love the interaction between Samantha and Ryan! Way to play hard to get. :)

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  3. UnknownJanuary 9, 2011 at 6:34 AM

    These two promise a lot of fun, interesting interactions...

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  4. Lisa FoxJanuary 9, 2011 at 8:17 AM

    They have such great tension. And that double entendre is totally hot!

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  5. AnonymousJanuary 9, 2011 at 8:29 AM

    "Coming?" LOL. Love it!! Great snippet.

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  6. AnonymousJanuary 9, 2011 at 8:53 AM

    I love how fun this is. I'm a big fan of scenes that have a certain, sexy humor to them.

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  7. AnonymousJanuary 9, 2011 at 9:32 AM

    He could coax me to do his biding! LOL Great six

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  8. Sandra SookooJanuary 9, 2011 at 9:33 AM

    Nice snippet :-)

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  9. AnonymousJanuary 9, 2011 at 9:43 AM

    Sounds like fun! Nice snippet.

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  10. AnonymousJanuary 9, 2011 at 10:06 AM

    Great snippet.

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  11. An Open BookJanuary 9, 2011 at 10:42 AM

    Stairs can be fun too... so many potential positions- he should've followed Samanatha

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  12. marianneJanuary 9, 2011 at 10:46 AM

    Your girl has a great imagination. I like the way she thinks.

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  13. L. A. GreenJanuary 9, 2011 at 12:37 PM

    Love the teasing tone in Ryan's words and Samantha's internal struggle. Fun snippet!

    Is this Contemporary Romance (or erotica)? GREAT title.

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  14. Jayel KayeJanuary 9, 2011 at 1:22 PM

    You're writing about what every woman who watches football is thinking. Great hands and nice tight butts... oh yes

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  15. UnknownJanuary 9, 2011 at 1:39 PM

    Hmmm. I think she's making a bad call here.

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  16. ArleneJanuary 9, 2011 at 1:45 PM

    So much suggested with few words, along with perfect double entrendre. Well done.

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  17. LizJanuary 9, 2011 at 1:58 PM

    Thanks everyone!

    @Laurie - it's very hot and may border on erotica - I sent it to Ellora's Cave. There are several sex scenes - weigh room, in back on his humvee, an actual bed, and the shower - so I don't know.

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  18. LizJanuary 9, 2011 at 2:09 PM

    @Dawn - agreed stairs can be fun too!

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  19. Lex ValentineJanuary 9, 2011 at 3:22 PM

    Oh man. How could she not go for it?

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  20. Marsha A. MooreJanuary 9, 2011 at 4:16 PM

    Love her internal conflict! I think she'll regret that decision.

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  21. LizJanuary 9, 2011 at 4:46 PM

    lol - good things comes to those who wait

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