Sunday, January 9, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday - 1/9/11



Going back a couple of chapters in Playing For Keeps.
Ryan has proposition Samantha to come up to his room (she is staying at the same hotel as the football team) They reached the elevator at the same time after checking in but she won’t get in and Ryan put his hand on the door so it won’t close as he awaits her decision...

Those hands could cradle the ball with such subtle grace that made her breasts ache in need. He caught impossible passes, using his long, slender fingers to coax the ball to do his bidding, like he would coax her to a climax.
“Coming?” he asked suggestively.
Samantha looked him in the eyes and swallowed her lustful thoughts. “I’ll take the stairs.”
Ryan shook his head in disappointment and dropped his hand. “Chicken.”
The door slid shut.

22 comments:

  1. I love the interaction between Samantha and Ryan! Way to play hard to get. :)

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  2. These two promise a lot of fun, interesting interactions...

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  3. They have such great tension. And that double entendre is totally hot!

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  4. "Coming?" LOL. Love it!! Great snippet.

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  5. I love how fun this is. I'm a big fan of scenes that have a certain, sexy humor to them.

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  6. He could coax me to do his biding! LOL Great six

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  7. Stairs can be fun too... so many potential positions- he should've followed Samanatha

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  8. Your girl has a great imagination. I like the way she thinks.

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  9. Love the teasing tone in Ryan's words and Samantha's internal struggle. Fun snippet!

    Is this Contemporary Romance (or erotica)? GREAT title.

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  10. You're writing about what every woman who watches football is thinking. Great hands and nice tight butts... oh yes

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  11. Hmmm. I think she's making a bad call here.

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  12. So much suggested with few words, along with perfect double entrendre. Well done.

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  13. Thanks everyone!

    @Laurie - it's very hot and may border on erotica - I sent it to Ellora's Cave. There are several sex scenes - weigh room, in back on his humvee, an actual bed, and the shower - so I don't know.

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  14. @Dawn - agreed stairs can be fun too!

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  15. Oh man. How could she not go for it?

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  16. Love her internal conflict! I think she'll regret that decision.

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  17. lol - good things comes to those who wait

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