Sunday, November 21, 2010

Six Sentence Sunday - 11/22/10

This is my second week of Six Sentence Sunday. Again from my work-in progress Love By Design.

Russ is Victoria's temporary co-host on a design show but he'd been moonlighting as a stripper for the Thunder Down Under Male Revue. He invites her to a show. Her friend Ava drags here there and Russ brings her up on the stage. The song ends and....

Russ reached for her hand and led her back to her seat but before she climbed down he kissed her hand like he was a gentleman from a Jane Austen novel instead of stripper wearing only a sequined thong. She so did not feel like a lady.
Maybe he’d give her a private performance tonight then she’d turn the tables on him and peel off her clothes for him.
“I can’t believe you just did that.” Ava shouted out at her when she got down.
Victoria sported a feline smile that Catwoman would’ve have been proud of. “Got a cigarette?”


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5 comments:

Taryn Kincaid said...

Fun scene! Keep on with this!

Marie Dees said...

Oh, that's fun.

Lyncee said...

What a neat twist...good luck

JL Walters said...

I do like this story.

marianne said...

Great! Creates the movie in my mind!